Poem

I wrote that poem about 2 years ago. It was in response to a whole day where everything felt so weird, like it wasn't real. It was more like a dreamlike state, i think.
To express that feeling, I wrote that poem. Well, i had written a different last peice to it, the ending i posted here was added on shortly before i typed it.
Anyways, I want to know what you think of it. I like it, esp the imagery and such. It's not spectatularily happy, but i think it's a pretty good poem anyway. I can comment on it because it was written so long ago that it's like im a different person now.
that is all for now.
~Mandi